Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show don't tell

Show don't tell

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

·                     Write in the third person
·                     Use capital letters and full stops.

Her heart was beating. her face went red as if she was going to burst into flames. her teeth were clanging so loud it sounded like nails being hammered in. She was thinking why is this happening. She was yelling “help” “help” and she was running as fast as a cheetah, next minute she found herself in a……

Can you find out what emotions i'm writing about.

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